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07 November 2014 @ 01:53 pm
Something There ××× for wintryriots  
Written for: wintryriots
Title: Something There
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 16,000
Summary: Some people think fairy tales are just stories to tell but what they don't know is that each story holds truth.
Warning/s: possibly historically inaccurate, (kind of) story within a story, mostly self-beta'd
Author's Note: I want to thank R for letting me work out ideas with her and looking over parts of the fic, S for giving me helpful tips to keep me on track, and D and T for feeding me. To my dearest recipient: This might not be what you were expecting, but I hope you like it regardless!

This is the story about how a demon and a human found each other and how everything changed when they fell in love.
 
 
 
JJ ♥mrs_nogood on November 7th, 2014 08:47 pm (UTC)
CRIES A RIVER CAUSE DEMON PRINCE JONGDAE IS ALL I COULD HAVE EVER ASKED FOR - I LOVE YOU AUTHOR NIM

God will there be one comment that I dont start in capslock?! But seriously this story moved me deeply! I have a soft spot for fairytales and soulmates - this story pulled me away from my boring life and pushed me into a whole new world. I really felt Luhan's urge to leave and suffered along with Jongdae's loneliness. I really enjoyed the "fairytale book" parts which you inserted in between which outlined the story and hinted at what was happening next and yet didnt tell us anything at all.

I SQUEALED SO MUCH WHEN LUHAN DECIDED TO GO BACK TO JONGDAE GDI
(....and top!Jongdae is such an A+ move lemme bow down to you okay)

This story will definitely go on my favorite reads list.

Thank you for writing it♡
(⁎˃ᆺ˂)wintryriots on November 9th, 2014 05:39 pm (UTC)
WHERE DO I START WITH HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS ;;;;;

first off, thank you so much for taking your time to write this because i was a little worried that maybe my prompts wouldn't be inspirational enough and wow 16k is no walk in the park to write and i just need a moment to process all of this and to thank you again!

okay so i'm a huge sucker for stories like these with such fantastic storytelling weaved into the actual story and it works so well with how you did it. the characterization and flow was on point and i finished this without even realizing it and is it selfish of me to want so much more of this au-verse?? i mean, the imagery worked very well — it was magical and elegant but then the smut kind of just stole my breath and how it ended left me rolling around in my bed. i just loved this so much, i feel like it's hard for me to accurately describe how i feel.

but ngl my heart was beating throughout this!! and the ending couldn't have been more perfect with jongdae being a little jealous and luhan saying he loves him and sighs happily with happy tears ;;;;;; i wanted to add some quotes but wheezes how do i choose my favorite ones! i'm just going to lay down and read it again and admire the wonderful work you did for me ;u;

thank you again so so much! ♥
caterplinacaterplina on February 21st, 2015 07:21 pm (UTC)
I loved the way it was written, that whole story in between the story. I liked the descriptions, the setting, i could picture the town, the woods and the castle. It was very fitting, like an actual fairy tale. I loved that.
Luchen's relationship was very well done, it was simple and endearing, how even if the soulmates aspect is mentioned, the relationgship was built up gradually. They didn't just jump on the soulmates train.
And i loved the side pairings (i was hoping for more xiukai at the end)
Overall, amazing story, i loved it!