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06 November 2014 @ 01:57 pm
The Bright Lights [Have Always Blinded Me] ××× for xogeneration  
Written for: xogeneration (AFF)
Title: The Bright Lights [Have Always Blinded Me]
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 14.6k
Summary: Lu Han lives out his idol life unapologetically as his manager tries to keep him in check.
Warning/s: brief Lu Han/Jongin, mentions of multiple past relationships
Author's Note: I sincerely hope this is close to what you were hoping for. I had a lot of fun moments writing this wonderful prompt despite my constant complaining. Also, thank you to A for perfecting it and to everyone who pushed me to get through it in one piece.

There’s a vein in Jongdae’s neck that tends to stick out noticeably when he’s attempting to contain his anger and Lu Han sees it appear just before Jongdae folds his arms across his chest, hip cocked.
 
 
 
ixxxreneixxxrene on November 8th, 2014 12:41 pm (UTC)
I have no idea who you are. I have a favourite LuChen author, but if you're not the said person, then you are my new favourite author. I love love love this so much! You wrote some of my favourite things on spot. How could I not love you. T_T When I thought you have written enough points to make me love this, you proved me wrong.

I love showbiz au so much and this is perfect! The behind story of Luhan's life is very well described! T_T I love scenes about idol's real life and attitude. I think you nailed it well. I enjoyed scenes with Jongin and Kyungsoo so much! It sounds so real, an idol with flings. And YES, Jongin is in the wrong industry!

I love how hard to get Jongdae is, the hard front he was putting. And how he's crushing Luhan's poor heart. Yes, those pushes are great. T_T I love his harsh replies to Luhan.

I should have got the hint when you mentioned the girl's finger! xD

ajhvnpajvvn;skn You included sweet Luhan. Cuddling scenes and kisses. Oh gosh I love those. T_T

I rarely commented about smut but I was so hyper reading and the smut was great and even top!Luhan! aiofhanaljbv YEAY, and they even switch. I'm going to admit I love riding scenes but I've never admitted out loud (for some reasons) but this is written exactly how I love it to be done, so I'm liking this fic more than I already have. T_T


Thank you for writing this! Please accept my love~ ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡

(I read the comment above after finished reading and I do agree.
Which is why I said if you're not my fav author, then I'm going to read all of your other fics if I haven't.)