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06 November 2014 @ 01:57 pm
The Bright Lights [Have Always Blinded Me] ××× for xogeneration  
Written for: xogeneration (AFF)
Title: The Bright Lights [Have Always Blinded Me]
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 14.6k
Summary: Lu Han lives out his idol life unapologetically as his manager tries to keep him in check.
Warning/s: brief Lu Han/Jongin, mentions of multiple past relationships
Author's Note: I sincerely hope this is close to what you were hoping for. I had a lot of fun moments writing this wonderful prompt despite my constant complaining. Also, thank you to A for perfecting it and to everyone who pushed me to get through it in one piece.

There’s a vein in Jongdae’s neck that tends to stick out noticeably when he’s attempting to contain his anger and Lu Han sees it appear just before Jongdae folds his arms across his chest, hip cocked.
 
 
 
JJ ♥mrs_nogood on November 7th, 2014 06:59 am (UTC)
WHERE TO START CAUSE THIS RIDE WAS AMAZING!!!

"[“Christ, Jongin,” Lu Han groans, “you’re in the wrong fucking industry.”

Jongin grins around his cock, the vibrations of his soft laughter stealing Lu Han’s breath away. Definitely the wrong industry. Jongin could make a killing in porn.]"

I'd like to second this. Jongin would make millions as a porn star - I'd buy his whole collection tbh!
Then the idea of Jongdae as the manager AND HIM HAVING FANSITES FOR HIS THIGHS - BLESS YOU!!!
God I love whiny Luhan so much especially when he has a strong willed Jongdae keeping him in line. The scene were Jongdae was sick and Luhan starts kissing him nevertheless had me SQUEAL like a cow in heat. How Luhan kept pecking his lips until Jongdae took over I just - FEELS!

The smut....oh good lord my heart was reading but it was super hot (especially the riding scene at the very end)
Whoever you are author please write LuChen again because this pairing seems to really suit you (and i want more - not gonna lie!)

love LOVED IT♡
ixxxreneixxxrene on November 8th, 2014 12:41 pm (UTC)
I have no idea who you are. I have a favourite LuChen author, but if you're not the said person, then you are my new favourite author. I love love love this so much! You wrote some of my favourite things on spot. How could I not love you. T_T When I thought you have written enough points to make me love this, you proved me wrong.

I love showbiz au so much and this is perfect! The behind story of Luhan's life is very well described! T_T I love scenes about idol's real life and attitude. I think you nailed it well. I enjoyed scenes with Jongin and Kyungsoo so much! It sounds so real, an idol with flings. And YES, Jongin is in the wrong industry!

I love how hard to get Jongdae is, the hard front he was putting. And how he's crushing Luhan's poor heart. Yes, those pushes are great. T_T I love his harsh replies to Luhan.

I should have got the hint when you mentioned the girl's finger! xD

ajhvnpajvvn;skn You included sweet Luhan. Cuddling scenes and kisses. Oh gosh I love those. T_T

I rarely commented about smut but I was so hyper reading and the smut was great and even top!Luhan! aiofhanaljbv YEAY, and they even switch. I'm going to admit I love riding scenes but I've never admitted out loud (for some reasons) but this is written exactly how I love it to be done, so I'm liking this fic more than I already have. T_T


Thank you for writing this! Please accept my love~ ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡

(I read the comment above after finished reading and I do agree.
Which is why I said if you're not my fav author, then I'm going to read all of your other fics if I haven't.)
katakyskatakys on November 8th, 2014 03:33 pm (UTC)
I'm so in love with this. Luhan, the bratty in love bastard and Jongdae, poor in love manager, and rising (porn) star Jongin, Baek, the drag queen.. Every single character, every single word about this was so good. I loved how they got together, weak Jongdae unable to resist Luhan anymore..
⚡️modelpress on November 9th, 2014 11:31 pm (UTC)
OH I REALLY LIKED THIS!!!!! ugh idol x exasperated manager is always sooooo much fun n u pulled it off perfectly fnfdsjkln

everything came together very nicely what with the character development on both sides and i just!!! :') i luv this i will be rereading this often
tangled wordslotusk on November 10th, 2014 05:27 pm (UTC)
WOW WOW! I don't even know where to begin because this story had so much going for it. So maybe I'll just list out the things I loved about it. this may take a while orz.

Luhan's complicated yearning for Jongdae and the lattter's complete refusal to entertain it.
Luhan's towering ego and the sledgehammer Jongdae takes to it every single day LOL!
Jongin's lips and his tongue jfc - "his parting gift" almost made my soul (and ovaries lbr) leave my body
Mystery lady X (idw to accidentally leave a spoiler) and how fricking jealous she made Luhan
Psycho Soo and the things he can do with a potato peeler and pestle - crying! and this outrage LOL: “Are you trying to get me murdered on television?” he hisses in Jongdae’s ear. I LOVED THIS SCENE SO MUCH I CANNOT.
Luhan's realization that he's in it for the long haul and his determination to convince Jongdae that he's worth taking a risk on - I loved the sensitive yet realistic way you portrayed this!

I just enjoyed the characterization so much and the A+ snark and witty interactions between the characters gave this fic amazing soul and humor. You've written a truly wonderful fic and i hope everyone reads this so they can experience it for themselves. SO MUCH LOVE
elladenelladen on November 11th, 2014 03:14 pm (UTC)
Oh, I really liked this a lot!
I love the characterization in every one of them along with the right amount of sass and snark especially from Jongdae.
The combination is just agckhbcj Luhan does need someone like Jongdae who's able to keep up with his demands and whatnot but still maintain that kind of relationship. It was also nice to see a shy Jongdae despite his very, strong character.
Great job!
teatimetaemintteatimetaemint on November 12th, 2014 08:50 am (UTC)
THIS
This story!
I have so much to say about this! And at the same time I don't know how! /wails
This was such a complex story, not because it was complicated, but because of the things it made me feel.
Luhan, for instance. L U H A N ! ! ! I'm actually pretty sure that I didn't like him, but at the same time I think I really loved him as a character. (Does that make sense? I'm probably not making sense orz) Somehow you managed to portray him as immature and sorta naive, but at the same time there was a determination and experience to his actions and I don't even know how you did that, but it worked. He was an amazing main character and the tension, sometimes-hostility, sometimes-something-entirely-different between him and Jongdae had me at the edge of my seat throughout this entire story. The volatile dynamic between them, Jongdae's refusal to put up with Luhan's bullshit, Luhan's determination to convince Jongdae he was actually serious and the almost fleeting glimpses of vulnerability in both of them were what really pushed the story for me. (And now that I'm rereading this I'm not sure if this actually sounds like the compliment it's supposed to be. But it is one! A gigantic one, actually!) I'm just so in love with the characterization here. Not just Luhan and Jongdae, but Kyungsoo and Jongin and Baekhyun as well. Their appearances aren't extensive, but you managed to paint them so vividly, so distinctively with so little 'screen-time' and I'm just x__x HOW TO WRITE LIKE THAT?!

Basically I'm just really in love with this entire story and your wonderfully imperfect characters. I had the most amazing time reading this!

(Also I have to mention this because... I just have to mention this. Bless you for top!Luhan AND top!Jongdae. Switching makes me so blissfully happy! (ノ´ヮ´)ノ*:・゚✧)
caterplinacaterplina on February 21st, 2015 07:03 pm (UTC)
This was a great fic!! I loved these luchen interactions, flirty luhan that failed to get jongdae was great :) it was very very sexy too. All the comments about chen's body haha
i feel like the fic the right lenght. It was very detailed. I liked that.